Sample 1 — Blog paragraph
Focus: punctuation, clarity, word choice
I started learning how to manage my time better, but it’s hard because I always feel like I have a
million things to do. The truth is I’m trying to do it all at once and it makes me overwhelmed, so i end
up doing nothing. It’s kind of a cycle that never ends.
I started learning how to manage my time better, but it’s hard because I always feel like I have a
million things to do. The truth is, I’m trying to do everything at once—and it leaves me overwhelmed, so
I end up doing nothing. It becomes a cycle that’s hard to break.